Yes, I archived. Deal with it! And don't write wherever you want, dammit!! Use the section you used the first time!!! The Ground His Armored Goddess Walks Upon (Welcome To The End!) 23:41, March 24, 2014 (UTC)
Per forgot her title lol. She's back from hospital too, aww yiss. Anyway, for the first magic, try and distinguish curse from demon curses, I know, I know, you told me lol, but some people, ehh- but you can make that magic! However, for the sensory sharing ability, how about you put in that "wild and reckless attacks out of nowhere can throw the user out of sync with the sensory" or something like that, for another weakness? All in all, I'm okay with it, but I think you should emphasise the weaknesses so people don't go 'omg overpowered'. But GENDER SWAP AWW YISS :P
Now, for the second one. This one is GREAT! Real interesting- not really overpowered since people actually do stuff like give kids their parents' magic and all that all the time, but you've properly explained it and given it a bit of an 'oomph'. But lol yeah, you'll need to explain the mechanics for that a bit better. Want me to help? Let's co-own and I'll regulate it :) The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 13:13, March 25, 2014 (UTC)
I'd say yeah, and perhaps Jutsu Shiki; maybe with that (since it can issue commands), they can create a fixed process for the ritual to happen. But that's just me. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 07:21, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
Oh man, sorry. I don't know HOW I didn't see it even though it was right in front of me. Maybe my operation didn't stick. Of course I'll help you out! Just gimme a day or two (maybe even less), I'll have a few reasons as to how he did it. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 07:52, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
Sorry I'm taking so long. A storm came up 'ere and knocked some trees on my house...which I spent all day removing since we couldn't call the guys who do that (lol forgot 'em). :( I should be done, I'm writing three backstories for 'em, so you can pick out which one you want. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 14:00, March 29, 2014 (UTC)
Sorry this took so long. It's winter and storming like hell here. Anyway,
Eye of Bonds (絆眼, Kizunagan –decided upon a name so that I could explain properly, if you don't like it/have a better one/already named it, just change it and any time I mention it Ziki): The Eye of Bonds is a peculiar Subspecies Magic of Eye Magic—as it is not something that one can learn, but rather, inherit. It is a magic that has come about with a literal "deal with the devil", or rather, a demon. Around two or more centuries ago (feel free to change this), the head of the user's family forged a deal with an ancient demon from the Book of Zeref—creating a bond that transcended species. This bond was to infuse the demon's own power within the eye of every member of the family (you can change this to anything), awakening a special ability. However, this is not a curse, but a magic due to the fact that the demon simply synchronized its aura with the family head upon making the pact, allowing the head to water down the demon's energies and transform it into pure magical energy, resulting in the Eye of Bonds holding firm basis in magic.
Basically deal with the demon to get the eye.
However, you can make it so that "the demon would choose a recipient" or something, avert the whole "clan of eye users" like Naruto lol.
-throws my other ideas away-
We have a winner.
No problemo~ and lmao. Also, I hate to do this, but it's rules, so can you do me a little favour? For your asking about Erza, can you explain these things? You must provide a reason for the character's existence in your own fanon stories or collaborations - this is to ensure you aren't breaking away from canon in the entirety; as well as this, outline briefly how you'd like to differentiate the character from canon - mainly in terms of how you envision them as a character. This can apply in personality, or even powers to some extent. Can you explain to me what you'd change? I know armours and sword techs, but can you explain what else? Sorry about that. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 06:15, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
Gimme a day or two Ziki, I've got something special for you :P It's how to get around the Narukami ban- if you don't like what I make, I'll see about what the other admins think about lifting the ban altogether. I mean it can't be unbanned for one person, can it? The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 09:52, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
- Papillion Armour (パピリオン・アーマー, Papirion Āmā): The Papillion Armour is an extremely powerful magical armour that is exclusive to Erza Scarlet; having replaced her Nakagami Armour (天一神の鎧, Nakagami no Yoroi)—in fact, it is said to be hewn from the Nakagami in order to regulate its power better, though one can properly confirm this claim. The Papillion Armour is an elegant armor composed of a short blue robe trimmed gold which is largely open in the middle, revealing much of Erza's chest. The robe is tied together at the waist with a simple purple rope held together by a gold bead. The robe has elegant multi-layered trim. She wears two large blue gloves which have gold trims flaring out in the ends. The gloves have purple ribbons tied around the wrist and are adorned in a simple pattern of gold dots. She wears a large golden pauldron over each shoulder, bearing the image of a lion with an open mouth. She has blue and gold leggings which match the gloves in their pattern and design. Around the leggings are a pair of gold greaves. The knee plates contain a pattern similar to the tiara she wears. The greaves themselves match the pattern of her robe. Atop her head sits a tiara consisting of two blue rhombus shaped pieces to each side and a center blue triangular shaped piece. Each piece has a gold adornment inside. Two strands of hair from the sides of her head are each tied together by a golden bead with an intricate swirling pattern. Behind her is a large white sash which loops above her head with the ends hanging out towards the ground with a bead on each end. While this is identical to the Nakagami Armour, the Papillion Armour is shown to possess two large, glowing butterfly wings made out of pure magical energy when its ability is in effect. The armour comes equipped with a large halberd with a golden circular hand guard in the center. The blade is quite large with a semi circle of small rhombuses on the other side. A purple cloth is tied right below the blade.
- Papillion Armour Special Abilities: Very much like its predecessor, the Papillion Armour drains Erza of unbelievably high amounts of magical energy, but this is for a good reason—Nullification Magic seals are riddled all through the armour, giving it the ability to negate opposing magic that comes into contact with the armour. The process in which this action is done is that thanks to Nullification Magic, upon contact with the armour, the seals break down the spell composition, forcibly separating it into simple eternano particles, leaving the attack absolutely harmless. However, not all types of magic are nullified. Magic that harms the person is stopped, excluding spells not directly harming but disabling such as a disarm spell, while magic that helps the person is not. In addition, magical spells are stopped by magic neutralization but they do not stop physical attacks, so even if the attacker is a demon, monster or a person powered by magic any attack that is physical like punching, kicking or using a weapon will not be stopped. The Papillion Armour does not block helpful magic that it only effects magic that the possessor would not want to happen, such as attacks on their person. This special ability also extends to the armour's weapon, giving Erza a little extra range.
I kept the appearance of the Nakagami Armour because you said you liked it—and I gave a justification for having a similar appearance and ability. I watered it down so it's not as overpowered—I added a few clearly defined weaknesses so that nobody'd complain. Anyway, watcha think?I can add more if you want. Btw Dispelling and Nullification Magic are the same thing basically, the only difference is that the latter has an article that I made lol. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 11:54, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
Sure, you can change the name- it's yours, afterall! Also,
cool story bro nice backstory behind that! I love it! So go ahead~ Also, they'll be in Daybreak (my story, same setting as Dawn, better characters lol), but I might put including them on hold to focus other things first. And finally, re-reading that little story, I can finally say...YOU'RE THE BIGGEST FAN OF ERZA I KNOW :P Also ignore my crappy attempts at humour pal lol. The Tenth Doctor(Brilliant!)(Still more~) 11:38, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
Yo Ziki Edit
http://fairytailfanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Phantombeast/Phantom%27s_Ring_of_Hope_-_Special_Chapter_2, just thought you would be interested in this Guild-Ace (Mmmm check plz) 23:42, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
CHAT AND GO! Edit
Da Rulez Edit
Oi Ziki, I've checked before, and, unless I missed something, there is no rule stating more than one person cannot use the same image. And if I missed it, and there is a rule like that, I'mma be the first one to go and rectify that damn quick.--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 17:20, April 1, 2014 (UTC)
The rule you might be referencing is
- 3.2: You cannot use other people's work without their explicit permission ― This means no using articles along with content used in those articles without permission from the author/creator. See Rule 5 for clarification.
that one, but, given the images are cases of content you found, not original content you created yourself; a far cry from, say, Dyan, whose images were made for me, and thus, belong to me, or Shiro, whose images were made by Cayo for himself and thus he owns them. So, yeah, unless I've really missed one, there is no rule that allows the "faceclaiming" of images man.--The Eleventh Doctor (Trust me. I'm the Doctor.) 17:37, April 1, 2014 (UTC)